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A Painful Soul by ~purplesunset:iconpurplesunset:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed


I feel pain inside my soul,
Of anguish and sorrow,
I've lost a part of me, a friend.

My soul is crying out:
With great tears in its eyes,
Of the fear and pain that lies inside.

Though my tears are drowned,
By the scream of pain
As part of me is hurt, lost again.

I cry, I cry,
All hurt and torn,
As my soul lays crumpled down on the stone.

The fear drives me insane
As I call for help again,
Someone save me from this pain.
©2004-2009 ~purplesunset
:iconpurplesunset:

Author's Comments

I fell out with one of my good friends a few days ago. This is just about the hurt that I was feeling then. Im new to DA so if I make any mistakes please tell me. I'd like comments too.
Hope you like it!
:)

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~ant1441 Jul 10, 2004, 11:47:10 AM
You seem like a good poet, welcome to DA, I'm quite new aswell.

Anyway its a good poem, I hope you and your friend sort things out, and you find happier things to write about.
:iconpurplesunset:
~purplesunset Jul 10, 2004, 12:18:08 PM
thanks (Icyblues says)- since when have u been new, and HOW is this depressin? COmpared 2 mine it isn't
(Purple Sunset says): Thanks,

--
~Not every day can rock, but oh well, that's life~
:iconpurplesunset:
~purplesunset Jul 10, 2004, 12:18:10 PM
thanks (Icyblues says)- since when have u been new, and HOW is this depressin? COmpared 2 mine it isn't
(Purple Sunset says): Thanks a

--
~Not every day can rock, but oh well, that's life~
:iconpurplesunset:
~purplesunset Jul 10, 2004, 12:18:11 PM
thanks (Icyblues says)- since when have u been new, and HOW is this depressin? COmpared 2 mine it isn't
(Purple Sunset says): Thanks a lot and

--
~Not every day can rock, but oh well, that's life~
:iconpurplesunset:
~purplesunset Jul 10, 2004, 12:18:11 PM
thanks (Icyblues says)- since when have u been new, and HOW is this depressin? COmpared 2 mine it isn't
(Purple Sunset says): Thanks a lot

--
~Not every day can rock, but oh well, that's life~
:iconpurplesunset:
~purplesunset Jul 10, 2004, 12:18:16 PM
thanks (Icyblues says)- since when have u been new, and HOW is this depressin? COmpared 2 mine it isn't
(Purple Sunset says): Thanks a lot and hope to

--
~Not every day can rock, but oh well, that's life~
:iconpurplesunset:
~purplesunset Jul 10, 2004, 12:18:16 PM
thanks (Icyblues says)- since when have u been new, and HOW is this depressin? COmpared 2 mine it isn't
(Purple Sunset says): Thanks a lot and hope

--
~Not every day can rock, but oh well, that's life~
:iconpurplesunset:
~purplesunset Jul 10, 2004, 12:18:17 PM
thanks (Icyblues says)- since when have u been new, and HOW is this depressin? COmpared 2 mine it isn't
(Purple Sunset says): Thanks a lot and hope to read

--
~Not every day can rock, but oh well, that's life~
:iconpurplesunset:
~purplesunset Jul 10, 2004, 12:18:19 PM
thanks (Icyblues says)- since when have u been new, and HOW is this depressin? COmpared 2 mine it isn't
(Purple Sunset says): Thanks a lot and hope to read sine

--
~Not every day can rock, but oh well, that's life~
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